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    Palkia looks at the Moon.(story)

    Before I send out this thread, I would like to introduce this
    story and tell you what I will do with it. For now I will give
    you this story one paragraph at a time not to over do any
    page. So, here's the story.

    In the land of Sinnoh after the Team Galactic group
    finished using Palkia to create a new world, Palkia looked
    beyond the Sellar Pillar ruins and looked at a full moon
    rising from the horizon. She noticed that Mespirit still
    floated around Dawn and that Dawn loved her pokemon
    like children. Palkia paused to rest and saw Dawn hugging
    Piplip and Mespirit. Palkia paused to focus on the moon
    as well as Dawn.

    "Piplip, is this your trainer? She seems to really care
    for you."

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    Very Nice Judy. Is this your own work or a story?

    teddy

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    That is lovely Judy, I look forward to reading more.


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    Okay I will type some more of the story. I made this one.
    Only thing Pokemon is a product of Nintendo.
    This is fan fiction.

    Palkia's eyes changed from an angry red to a beautiful green like
    any other space alien. Piplip nodded back to Palkia and climbed
    upon her big shoulders. Dawn was in awe of Palkia's beauty and
    how tall and huge she was. Darkari arose up from the ruins to
    greet them. Palkia looked up at a beautiful starry sky with a full
    moon rising.

    "What a sight! I should say since I control it."

    Palkia smiled at Piplip and Darkari as Piplip sat on her pearl. Dawn
    and Darkari were side by side.

    "Dawn, let's go to my dimension and I will keep you safe.
    Thank you for paying me a visit Darkari. Until we meet again."

    judy tooley

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    Dawn looked at Palkia with Piplip back in her arms as Palkia
    created a bubble around them for protection as they floated
    through space. Millions of stars swarmed like bees as they
    toured the universe. When the tour was over, Palkia brought
    them safely back to Earth near Veilstone City.

    "Thank you for such a beautiful journey and keeping us so
    safe. You're just as beautiful as the universe Palkia."

    Palkia roared with joy and seemed to want to stay and make
    the ruins her resting place. As palkia set on top of the
    mountains peak, she laid to rest and watched the moon pass.
    Palkia knew that she controled space and Dialga controled time.
    She sang an angelic song as she slept. Palkia called for him to
    come. In a blue flash there it stood like a proud solder.
    She hurries over to hug Dialga and cried out in pain for the red
    chain was around her so tight. Dawn got out her Luxury to cut
    the chain without success. Mespirit used one of her moves but
    the chain wouldn't budge.

    judy tooley

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    "Dialga, this is Dawn and her Pokemon friend Piplip.
    Dawn rescued me from the evil ones and I sent them
    to their deserved dimension. Now I'm really tired."

    After Dialga left, palkia laid down between two pillars
    in the old ruins on her side as Dawn and Piplip snuggled
    up to her to stay warm close to her glowing pearl on
    her shoulder. They slept until daybreak.

    Ash Ketchum was running as fast as he could to reach
    Stelar pillar along with Pikachu to help out Dawn. When
    he arrived he found Dawn asleep next to a huge pink and
    lavender colored creature. Pikachu check out this sleeping
    giant creature and touched it.

    "Pikachu! Pika pika!"

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    Palkia opened her eyes and groaned sore from the red chain.
    She gave out a big yawn and stretched. She grabbed the red
    chain that was still around her waist and pulled hard. Ash had
    Pikachu to use iron tail to cut off the tight chain. Palkia was
    hurt from the chain that dug into her and the chain finally broke
    and fell off. Pikachu and Piplip looked up at Palkia and she
    looked at them. To touch Palkia's armor felt like silk and her
    scales felt smooth as down feathers. Palkia turned her eyes
    on Ash.

    "Palkia, do you remember me? I'm Ash and this is Pikachu."

    Palkia nodded. Pikachu climbed up on her shoulder and
    piplip on the other like two kids. Darkari came up from the
    ground once again.
    judy tooley

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