Feedback on composition.

[Fazgaz]

Hi, there
I'm not sure if i'm in the right place to post this.
but I'll post it anyways

http://soundcloud.com/garry-cho

I am a self taught musician trying to expand my horizons in music in terms my writing and also listening.

Any feedback would be much appreciated!
thank you in advance for giving it a listen

[wljmrbill]

Welcome my friend. the untitled idea has a drmatic affect..be interesting to see how you develope this.
The Lost Ship ... I seem to feel like I am seeing/hearing a bird flying over a landscape looking for something maybe that lost ship. Good luck with your comtinued work.

[teddy]

Hello fazgaz and welcome to the forum. Found your music most interesting. Keep plugging away

teddy

[Fazgaz]

thanks heaps!!
also thank you for welcoming me..
I like the visual you've given me Bill, was actually planning to try to make a "video" for this song..yours so far sounds like a great idea!

I will be keeping you guys updated through this post. I won't be uploading much until the end of the month as I have exams at the moment.
but seriously, thank you soo much for your encouragement and thoughts on my music,
actually means a lot!