First song! want reviews! :)

[Daddy's Juice]

First composition - wow. Keep going...very well put together. Not normally my choice of music to listen to, but so well done. Great production as well.

[james12]

Hello Dear,
Very Sweet Composition, I am waiting for your Next
Best Of Luck ............

Thanks

[franksspace]

Lovely progression in the tune. Very mature in that. I would never had seen
this as someones first instrumental piece. You must hide some talent - ready
to unfold. Please do get some better drum samples next time though.
Then you also do not have to hide them, as much as you do!.
And work on the overall sound if possible. A more organic feel is appreciated.

Its excellent for what it is . and the youtube views talk for you as well.
Keep it up!! - looking forward to hear more.
Thanks for the share!
franks,
franksspace

franksspace atmospheres

[Contratrombone64]

Hello! I'm a bass and guitar player who developed same taste for crossover music so I started to compose. This is my first song and I want some critics. Thank you! Here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCx5PI0Odpc

It's lovely but it is not a SONG, (song by definition has words and lyrics).