"ship" for review

this is a work in semi-progress.
I would classify this as being in the alien rock category. :smirk:
I know what I don't like about it.
Please share critiques and reviews.
I could use a few summary comments as well.
Thank you in advance.
here is the link
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9521761
or
http://soundcloud.com/stormato/ship

will check later as site is down at this point...6:15 p.m.Friday

Ha.. that was nice..
Funny song .. and a nice performance.
Its a kind of song that either its loved or hated.
Personally I loved it.. my lady on the other side yells at me every time I turn it on.
I cannot say many things on your personal work because I do not know the original piece.
Anyway keep it up man.. look forward hearing more.


Always honest
elfspell

I like where this is going as a WIP , my opinion is the music was very muddy sounding . The elements were there but not mixed correctly with that ship sound you added in , funny and would like to hear it with some clean crisp sounds .
One other point , I like your vocals for this funny song !

blackcrow