Hi Cyndee,
first off, I'm basing my impressions on how the song opens the room. There is personality emerging in your music. I really like the rhythmic drive, but after 15 or 20 seconds I start to expect more. At around 25 sec.(where the high d comes in) I can feel a stress with the harmonies and the timing between synth. and violin. (Is it violin?). Also, for me there is far too much reverb, the harmonies don´t really develop, which makes the music very simple. Then I feel that there is too much domination of the syntheziser and because of the unballanced reverb, unisono lines don´t sound really together. It seems to me that instead of restating it without alteration so many times, you might could have developed it more. I lost interest in the piece after a minute or so although the guitar solo and the kind of deminuendo and decescendo is very nice, and did not regain it until around 2 min. when your violin solo kicked in. And even there it dosen´t sound very clear. I love the challange to the effected guitar at around 2:50 min. Then it fades out with this windy sound. I am not incredibly qualified to critique and english is also not my main language. So please just take this from some person who just noticed your music and your want of a reply. I really liked your music but I thought that behind all the electronic stuff hides a person who has much more to say than this.
With kind regards,
Torsten Brandes
