Hi Frederik.
This being my first post read and replied to here on MIMF for over 3 months please excuse my "interruption".
The "tune" has a nice calm start, and the initial thematics are quite good. It's clear, though, that you're unsure what the direction of this will be as it comes of a little monotonous and repetitive. You have some nice themes and thematics, but need some more contrast and more "sense of direction" for it to really "take heights".
But a nice start and with some work you might find your "new world" in the end - though the "newness" is sounding somewhat familiar as it has some "folk/traditional music" feel in the latter part of the piece.
Keep up the good work!
Cheers :cheers:
Thomas